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SamLikewise

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This is amazing, can't believe it's your first comic strip, it's amazing, only suggestions is that maybe a little colour could have been added but that might take away from the effect that it has being pure black and white. Keep up the great work :D

ArtyNazza responds:

Ohh thank you so much, that really means a lot that you think his is amazing, thank you very much :)))
And yeah I was scared about how it would turn out, I tried going for the vintage Conic Strip black & white look on this piece, lines were a nightmare lol!
Thanks a lot @SamLikewise :)

Disturb is spelt wrong, but I love the way you got the eyes to glow

CartoonyCartoons responds:

I updated it, hopefully its good now.
Thank you very much :)

The dragon looks great but all the scales make it hard to distinguish all the finer details and outlines such as where each digit (finger) starts, maybe next time don't make the outline of the scales as dark, it also took a while for me to see the kitten due to the similar colour to the dragon and position of his front leg. The idea is great though and I love the horns of the dragon. Keep up the great work :D

SvjanKppe responds:

Thanks for the feedback

looks good but the cat appears to be in front of the dragon and not looking directly at it but to its right, the perspective seems a bit out but other than the colours are really good, the shadows are great and I love the expressions.

SKW responds:

Ah, I see that! Thanks for giving good advice and I'll watch for creating better perspective in future pieces.

Love the detail in the dragon, the subtle pattern really looks great. The kitten could do with some shadow perhaps but other than that I think it looks really good :D

RTorrence18 responds:

Thank you very much for the feed back! I am very new to art and this is the first time I have ever posted my work online. I'm very happy that you cared to look at it.

Looks good but some colour would really help liven it up a bit and make it stand out.

I didn't take art at GCSE or A-Level, only recently been trying stuff but its something I enjoy and would like to get better at. Any tips welcome :)

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